i went to a party, and remember what you said,
you told me not to drink so daddy,
i had a sprite instead
i felt pretty proud of myself
like you said i would ,
that i didn't drink and drive
though my friends said i should of
i made a healthy choice
your advice to me was right,
the party finally ended
and the kids drove out of sight
i got in my car thinking,
i would get home safe
i never knew what was coming next
daddy, something least expected
now i'm laying on the pavement cold and frial
i can hear the disappointment when the policeman said
“The kid who caused the wreck was drunk” daddy,
his voice seems so far away
my very own bloods lays all around me,
i try my best not to cry,
i can hear the paramedic say
“this poor girl is going to die”
i'm sure the guy had no idea,
while he was driving high
because he chose to drink and drive,
now i have to die
so why do people do it daddy,
if they know it could ruin other’s lives,
now the pain hurts like a thousand knives
tell brother to not be afraid
but to move on after my grave,
daddy you have done well
my life has been swell
and be sure to tell momma to be brave
and never let her pretty smile fade away
and when i go to heaven be sure to
put daddy's girl on my grave
someone should have to him
thats its wrong and dangerous to drink and drive
maybe if his parents did, i’d still be alive
daddy my breath ,is ,getting, shorter
i’m getting really scared
these are my final moments,
i am so unprepared
daddy i wish you were here to hold me,
at least i could feel your heartbeat as mine is put to rest,
as i lay here and die, i wish i could tell you i love you one more time,
so daddy i love you and good- bye.
I really like that i almost cried ....
ReplyDeletei really like it and is very sad
ReplyDeletethat was really nice.
ReplyDeleteAwhh that was so sad. I almost cried that was very creative though.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you worded tha and that was a great poem!
ReplyDeleteWow, that was one of those poems that was so sad to read, but I just had to finish it. Great work, you need to share this.
ReplyDeleteGreat story Makyla That was very touching great story
ReplyDeleteI liked your poem because it is a deals with drinking awereness
ReplyDeleteWow! that was amazing mikyla! i felt the power and the hurt all in that poem. it was beautiful girl.
ReplyDeleteThe poem is amazing and the heart felt. It was so sad but it had a purpose in the peom that caught my attendtion. No one should drink and drive and take someone elses lives.
ReplyDeleteThats amazing I almost cried when I was reading this
ReplyDeleteThis is deep, and I love it. I didn't think that something this deep could come from someone so light-hearted like you Mikyla. I'm very proud of you.
ReplyDeleteI read a poem that was like this on facebook!Good work (:
ReplyDeleteThat is a awsome poem and i wish people would not drink and drive thats how so many lives sre lost at a young age.
ReplyDeleteOMG!!! That was soo good I wanted to stop in the middle to cry but I didn't. Great Work!! p.s. i cryed at the "put daddy's little girl in my grave" part errggg soo sad..
ReplyDeleteI almost cried when i read this . really good job.
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