writing isn't always in statics
sometimes you just wanna go ballistic
but honestly, I'll never miss it
in writing you can always fix it
but in
the world you have to listen
because in life it will flash before your eyes
when you feel like everything is alright,
but I’ll still tell you life can be a wonderful surprise but still has the side of a big fright
yeah, but it’s nice not having to worry about fights,
when you can live life like a flying kite
wow that was realy good
ReplyDeleteI like the part about how life can flash before your eyes. It does, and then, with writing, you can recapture it. At least, that's how I read it.....
ReplyDeleteThis was a awesome poem mikyla!
ReplyDeleteI like your poem.
ReplyDeleteThe poem was awsome . i like it
ReplyDeleteYour poem is very true, in writing, you can be anything you want to be, and do anything. Writing is the freedom in an oppressive kind of world.
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Brittany and i'm a seventh grader. I love this poem, it is so sweet how this girl cares so much for her daddy.
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